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WW&F Railway Museum Discussion => Whimsical Weirdness and Foolery => Topic started by: John McNamara on January 11, 2012, 08:31:44 PM

Title: Unloading Brendan
Post by: John McNamara on January 11, 2012, 08:31:44 PM
Bill and I will be there to help unload Brendan!

The editor in me just cries out for a comma between "unload" and "Brendan," unless Brendan has gained so much weight that he needs to be unloaded. ;D

-John
Title: Re: January 2012 work planning
Post by: Dave Buczkowski on January 12, 2012, 10:09:38 AM
Thankfully the Punctuation Police arrived, I guess.....
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Ed Lecuyer on January 12, 2012, 01:54:31 PM
Bill and I will be there to help unload a comma Brendan!


There, fixed.
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Craig "Red" Heun on January 12, 2012, 06:00:30 PM
who's in a coma?  yeah yeah lame
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Mike Fox on January 12, 2012, 07:39:00 PM
uncomma response Red.
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Bill Reidy on January 12, 2012, 07:58:58 PM
Comma, guys - lay off the bad jokes.
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Pete "Cosmo" Barrington on January 13, 2012, 12:40:04 AM
No comma-ent.
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Craig "Red" Heun on January 13, 2012, 08:23:36 PM
It's okay, just say shut up Red! (notice the comma)
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Wayne Laepple on January 14, 2012, 11:52:58 AM
The former English teacher in me is compelled to point out, Red, that you sentence needs some help. As written, your sentence is a run-on sentence. It should look like this: It's okay; just say "Shut up, Red." Now go write the correct sentence 100 times.
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: James Patten on January 14, 2012, 05:58:45 PM
The former English teacher in me is compelled to point out, Red, that you sentence needs some help.

As a former English student, Mr. Laepple, I'm compelled to point out the grammatical error in your previous sentence.   ;D ::)
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Bill Reidy on January 14, 2012, 06:15:59 PM
This is just comma-cal.
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: John Kokas on January 14, 2012, 06:45:51 PM
Some of this discourse reminds me of a saying back at Engineering School -

Yisterday i coudn't spel engenneer,  now i ar one !!!!   LMAO
Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Craig "Red" Heun on January 14, 2012, 06:56:52 PM
I would reply... but I'm still writing my non run on sentences... how about dots...does that work?

How about this?   I would reply. However, I'm continuing to write my redundant corrected lessons. I forgot what I was taught in my Strunk and White's Elements of Stlye
 

Title: Re: Unloading Brendan
Post by: Wayne Laepple on January 14, 2012, 07:17:10 PM
Busted!